OK, so far you have a single posting towards your story and the link to the map. Note: the link is wrong and doesn't go to the map - you may want to re-post it. The drama of the story is the missing id. Certainly you can use this spatially - to search or re-trace your steps around Morgantown to find it. You need to think about incidents - what happens along the way? who do you meet? etc. - and a conclusion (how is the id found or not?). You could also tell more about the infamous haunted hayride. You need to think about breaking this up or segmenting it some across several blog posts. It's pretty long right now - remember what we said at the beginning of the semester about short, scannable text.
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OK, so far you have a single posting towards your story and the link to the map. Note: the link is wrong and doesn't go to the map - you may want to re-post it. The drama of the story is the missing id. Certainly you can use this spatially - to search or re-trace your steps around Morgantown to find it. You need to think about incidents - what happens along the way? who do you meet? etc. - and a conclusion (how is the id found or not?). You could also tell more about the infamous haunted hayride. You need to think about breaking this up or segmenting it some across several blog posts. It's pretty long right now - remember what we said at the beginning of the semester about short, scannable text.
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